The moon is over her head, stars are shining brightly and the waves are swinging into the sea. She misses his arms around her shoulders and his warm breath near her ear saying love words. She had never realized how much she would miss him when he was gone, and now that it has happened, she is trying to get over all the pain she's feeling. Her world is falling apart, but she's only waiting for him, she will wait until the sun raises again because she doesn't want this to end like this.
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She sleeps on the sand. The sun is shining above her and he put his hands on her hair, tenderly. He caresses her flushed cheeks while she opens her eyes. They're together again. No one can break this moment which will last forever.
That's the first time I write in English. I would like you to tell me if I make some mistakes. Thanks.
This is beautiful!
ResponderEliminarI only found one typo. You said that "the sun raised again" it should be "the sun rises again."
This is really great!! :D